Poem Analysis Tears idle Tears
Fisrt stanza: The speaker cries because he is remembering the past.
Second stanza: The speaker while he looks at the extense fields he stills remembers the past.
Third stanza: The speaker mentions he's inside a house while he hears the "half-aweakened birds" where we can infer its the morning sings of the birds.
Fourth stanza: He remembers that special person he used to loved, which is probably dead.
The title tears idle tears already give us the sadness connotation, but with a more deep analysis the tears represent the crying of the speaker because the loss of someone he loved. Also tell us that the pain probably will never leave because the crying has not stopped since she left.
domingo, 9 de noviembre de 2014
Europe Trip, Day 16
That day started early in the morning with some sports activities wich included jogging around the city, now the thing that make this day my favorite is because the teachers gave us all the day to explore the city by ourselves, London is a huge city divided by the river thames although it was very hard to get lost, in my case i went to one of the main streets of London named Picadelly Circus which has a lot of stores of all kind, from electronics to clothes, i think this was the day i walked the most at the end of the day i was exhausted but happy because i loved the city.
That day started early in the morning with some sports activities wich included jogging around the city, now the thing that make this day my favorite is because the teachers gave us all the day to explore the city by ourselves, London is a huge city divided by the river thames although it was very hard to get lost, in my case i went to one of the main streets of London named Picadelly Circus which has a lot of stores of all kind, from electronics to clothes, i think this was the day i walked the most at the end of the day i was exhausted but happy because i loved the city.
domingo, 22 de junio de 2014
Writting Task - Speech
Good morning alumni's, its an honor to speak to you today here in Harvard. May i introduce myself, im Alonso Jander and today i want to talk about of how money and ambition may affect in friendship.
Since that the human being is dependent to exchanges of products to survive the human being has adopted ways to acquire this products giving "money" for it. Since this invention of money the world changed on how it functions. Nowadays the world is ruled by money, if you dont have money you cant do the things you like or even live a decent life the actual society has the pattern of : study, get a good job, and try to have the biggest amount of profit as you can so you can live a decent life in this world. The problems of this money-ruled society is that the money most of the times brings more problems than solutions this problems are commonly the corruption and ambition.
Ambition can be good to achieve your personal goals in your life but most of the time ambition consumes the human and corrupt his values which leads to the social crisis of this individual, loose of friendships and even the family for the sake of money.
A great example of this, is in the recently story of the millionare Mark Zuckerberg. This story begins in this exact university Mark was one of you in the past and now he is the CEO of one of the most popular websites in the world. But like all the big industries he first started with nothing, in this case with 3 friends and a computer. In the begining Mark and his best friend Eduardo started with the website here in harvard, and then expanding it to other universities around the country. In less than a year Facebook was already very famous and started getting bigger wich means that more people joined the website. Now is here where the money with the recently empleoyee Sean Parker the cofounder of Napster, this individual convinced Mark to cut a giagantic part of the earns of his CFO Eduardo his best friend. Cutting his 35% to a 0.35% of the company. But Mark didnt expected that Eduardo sued him, and after the trial all that Mark won was a destroyed friendship and millions lost in payments.
Theres a clear messege in this story, in how extreme ambition can destroy your relation with the people you love, family and friends. So i ask you the following question is it worth to loose a lifelasting relationship for some money?
The reason i tell you this story is because you are the future of the world, you ladies and gentleman will be the future generation of proffesionals in the world, and i personally ask you to always be carefull and balance the ambitious life goals that you have with your relation with your close ones, always analaise what is the correct thing because it is something you will encounter day a day in the present,the XXI century.
Please remember the words i just told you if the moment comes.
Thanks for listening
Good morning alumni's, its an honor to speak to you today here in Harvard. May i introduce myself, im Alonso Jander and today i want to talk about of how money and ambition may affect in friendship.
Since that the human being is dependent to exchanges of products to survive the human being has adopted ways to acquire this products giving "money" for it. Since this invention of money the world changed on how it functions. Nowadays the world is ruled by money, if you dont have money you cant do the things you like or even live a decent life the actual society has the pattern of : study, get a good job, and try to have the biggest amount of profit as you can so you can live a decent life in this world. The problems of this money-ruled society is that the money most of the times brings more problems than solutions this problems are commonly the corruption and ambition.
Ambition can be good to achieve your personal goals in your life but most of the time ambition consumes the human and corrupt his values which leads to the social crisis of this individual, loose of friendships and even the family for the sake of money.
A great example of this, is in the recently story of the millionare Mark Zuckerberg. This story begins in this exact university Mark was one of you in the past and now he is the CEO of one of the most popular websites in the world. But like all the big industries he first started with nothing, in this case with 3 friends and a computer. In the begining Mark and his best friend Eduardo started with the website here in harvard, and then expanding it to other universities around the country. In less than a year Facebook was already very famous and started getting bigger wich means that more people joined the website. Now is here where the money with the recently empleoyee Sean Parker the cofounder of Napster, this individual convinced Mark to cut a giagantic part of the earns of his CFO Eduardo his best friend. Cutting his 35% to a 0.35% of the company. But Mark didnt expected that Eduardo sued him, and after the trial all that Mark won was a destroyed friendship and millions lost in payments.
Theres a clear messege in this story, in how extreme ambition can destroy your relation with the people you love, family and friends. So i ask you the following question is it worth to loose a lifelasting relationship for some money?
The reason i tell you this story is because you are the future of the world, you ladies and gentleman will be the future generation of proffesionals in the world, and i personally ask you to always be carefull and balance the ambitious life goals that you have with your relation with your close ones, always analaise what is the correct thing because it is something you will encounter day a day in the present,the XXI century.
Please remember the words i just told you if the moment comes.
Thanks for listening
lunes, 5 de mayo de 2014
Written task
Dear Jamie Shea
First of all im writting you this letter to demand you to quit your job. Why? Because what you are doing is totally unethical. Using your authority and language to create false facts to generate a less evil idea of war is as i said it before totally unethical. Stop using your language to disorting the truth. As a NATO spokesman the least we can expect is this kind of issues. Please stop using this biased language to persuade other people for a cause you invented. I now you are not a bad intentioned man but your descisions are generating a huge caos, thats why this massive use of euphemisms must stop now, thats why im demanding you to leave your charge and quit your job.
Adolus Huxley
BLog
To Avoid the word 'it' as the subject of a sentence:
The word it is removed in this case and also changed for the word being, then is finished this part of the letter with to me.So in this case this changes also help to reduce the repetition of certain words.
Use clauses, such as who, where or which:
The word where was changed by the word and, also the use of comas is added in the beginning.
English activity: Compare and contrast letters
http://www.thinkib.net/englishalanglit/page/9671/8-writing-tips
To Avoid the word 'it' as the subject of a sentence:
The word it is removed in this case and also changed for the word being, then is finished this part of the letter with to me.So in this case this changes also help to reduce the repetition of certain words.
Use clauses, such as who, where or which:
The word where was changed by the word and, also the use of comas is added in the beginning.
Use right verb tense :
As the verb tense changes it gives the idea that is tried to soy the writer instead of something that the writer thought it is now understander as something he thinks of.
As the verb tense changes it gives the idea that is tried to soy the writer instead of something that the writer thought it is now understander as something he thinks of.
Watch out for wordy sentences:
The number of words is reduced , in which it still gives the same message.
Never start a sentence with but:
In the letter the words but and job are removed, because both words are too repeated.
The number of words is reduced , in which it still gives the same message.
Never start a sentence with but:
In the letter the words but and job are removed, because both words are too repeated.
Don’t have too many clauses at the beginning of a sentence:
The number of clauses in the letter are just a few, changing the position most of the words. The change is in the beginning of the letter.
The number of clauses in the letter are just a few, changing the position most of the words. The change is in the beginning of the letter.
Parallel structures:
Is changed in such a way that it fits in the language of a work area, by changing the words person by colleague and use the word I just once, making the text more fluid.
Use active verbs instead of passive verbs:
The word I is added at the beginning, making it more active, as if anyone would give value to the organisation.
Is changed in such a way that it fits in the language of a work area, by changing the words person by colleague and use the word I just once, making the text more fluid.
Use active verbs instead of passive verbs:
The word I is added at the beginning, making it more active, as if anyone would give value to the organisation.
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